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-My name is Grant Hunter, I am a [software gardener](http://chrisaitchison.com/2011/05/03/you-are-not-a-software-engineer/) who likes building things. 
 
-Currently I am building out this project in an attempt to de-google. This is also an opertunity to learn more about managing servers because "The Cloud" has spoiled me.
+My name is Grant Hunter. I am a [software gardener](http://chrisaitchison.com/2011/05/03/you-are-not-a-software-engineer/) who enjoys building things. 
 
-You can find me in very few places on the web. The limited selection is here, [linkedIn](https://www.linkedin.com/in/grant-hunter-6b955b72/) and [github](https://github.com/grantdhunter). 
+Right now, I’m working on this project as part of an effort to de-Google my life. It’s also a great opportunity to deepen my knowledge of server management, something shovelling money into "The Cloud" has made all too easy to take for granted.
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+When I’m not working on tech, I am biking, hiking, or skiing, depending on the season.
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+I have a somewhat health distrust in social media but you can find me [linkedIn](https://www.linkedin.com/in/grant-hunter-6b955b72/) and [github](https://github.com/grantdhunter).